Well done for working on catching up. This is decent, but lacks detail and enough examples to get a top mark. Look at Arren, Megan, Gemma, Vicki, Lewis etc. for A grade pieces.
Get some more examples in. Some sound clips. Narrative and examples of (e.g. Star Wars), and examples of enigma. Every film opening has it.
Well done for working on catching up. This is decent, but lacks detail and enough examples to get a top mark. Look at Arren, Megan, Gemma, Vicki, Lewis etc. for A grade pieces.
ReplyDeleteGet some more examples in. Some sound clips. Narrative and examples of (e.g. Star Wars), and examples of enigma. Every film opening has it.
Low Level 3 (C)